Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Technology has made a great advancement in every aspect of life. And, has given a great mould towards digitalization. From my point of opinion, I believe the advantages of technology have overpowered the disadvantages of technology.
Due to traditional beliefs and our grandparent's viewpoint, technology is making people less social, according to them, the term socialization means meeting new people virtually and to have virtual relations amongst the people. Creating your social impact by having verbal communication, and to show physical presence in the society is termed as a social person. I agree with the belief that people are getting less sociable due to modern technologies, but that can be considered in exceptional cases only, it is individuals' responsibility to engage them physically and mentally in the society. However, technologic advancement is the best way to improve your social circle by engaging your self in social activities.
There are many advantages to it, if we talk about social media channels then I must appreciate the modern inventions which created a positive social impact over people by connecting them through messaging facility. Many channels such as Google My Business and Trade India have escalated business worldwide. Modern technology such as mobile phones, laptops, computers, and tabs includes many applications that help to create a communication channel between two people and leads to be a sociable person.
Due to advancement in technology and modernization, an individual regularly updates regarding the economic and financial condition of the country. Along with this, a person gets regular information over social sites about the current activities taking place in the city. Modern technology gives great exposure to an individual. Moreover, there is a video calling facility available through which we can talk to any person from any corner of the world. So modern technologies have given great exposure and constructive social life, but the difference is one should know how to avail the advantages of technology.
Technologic advancement has given a chance for introverts to convert into extroverts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 937.175257732 196% => OK
No of words: 332.0 206.0 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52409638554 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12240602168 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 127.690721649 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 290.88556701 203% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6677542788 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.625 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166864050425 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538486617776 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490043931532 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813729087444 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476936965115 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 70.7449484536 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 7.45979381443 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 8.71597938144 169% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 41.2886597938 252% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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