Success is defined as the achievement of the desired aim, or of fame, wealth or social position. At present time, success is very often measured by the amount of money we earn, or the position we hold, or the amount of wealth we have accumulated. Many may opine that the possibility of achieving success is higher by taking a risk than to careful planning. It is true that to reach a higher position in life one needs to take the risk, but that should not be any reckless decision. Taking risk is all about taking chances where we are not sure about the outcome. Risk should always encompass a realistic situation along with the careful planning of the contingencies.
The founder of the Facebook, Mark Zuckerberg believes, “The biggest risk is not taking any risk and in a rapidly changing world, the only strategy that is guaranteed to fail is not taking risks.” The success stories of the known successful peoples are rooted with taking the risk at some point in their life. The world would not enter into the technological advance era if few peoples did not dare to take a risk. The successful persons had always taken risks considering the pros and cons of their plan. It is imperative to have a clear aim and vision for reaching the end state to be successful while taking risks. Thus, taking risks to succeed demands careful planning and futuristic vision avoiding any reckless decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
...e amount of wealth we have accumulated. Many may opine that the possibility of achieving...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ew peoples did not dare to take a risk. The successful persons had always taken ris...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, while, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77868852459 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59353381117 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549180327869 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8927987311 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31171446376 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113297221831 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741077510358 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242314506304 0.12726935374 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190901153419 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.