The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.Write a letter to the local council. In your letter- Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working

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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
- Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
- Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
- Suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear Sir,
I am a resident of Cheetham Hill, Street 59. I intend to write this letter to grab your immediate attention over a crucial concern that is not only causing us disturbance in commuting but also raising health related issues. The garbage collection team in our area is lacking punctuality. Initially they used to pick garbage from each house daily but these days they only visit twice or sometimes thrice a week. Meanwhile, garbage cases remain full and create unwanted smell. Also, when the team is collecting rubbish, they do not empty the whole garbage case. Due to this, some rubbish remained in the cases resulting cats getting in the case and spread the whole rubbish all over the street. The leftover garbage creates unbearable smell and it children playing outside can catch viral infection from its bacteria.
Therefore, I request you to please pay attention to this issue at your earliest. Please ask the relevant teams to start collecting garbage on daily basis and make sure that it’s completely empty. Seeking your swift response on this.
Yours Sincerely,
Sam

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am a resident of Cheetham Hill, Street...
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Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ift response on this. Yours Sincerely, Sam
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04972375691 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45061101315 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.718232044199 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4801199784 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1666666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232952446522 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845347748856 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515288051614 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170347655081 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00100662774218 0.0580467560999 2% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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