Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I am unfortunately dissatisfied with the current garbage collection system in my area.Until last week every thing was fine however, things has changed dramatically when new garbage collectors are appointed replacing the previous one. As per my observation, they don’t come regularly. Some time its more than two days the rubbish collectors did not came.
Let me explain how this is affecting me and surrounding neighbours. Since the garbage collector are not regular, waste materials from surroundings keeps on getting stacked .This causes bad odour around us.Flies, mosquitoes and other insects keeps feeding on the garbage kept for days.Several minors got ill being in presence of such unhygienic atmosphere.
Would you kindly consult with the council members to solve this issue? I would like to suggest that replacing the current garbage collector will help us.Moreover, I think two rubbish bins should be installed outside of each house named with dry waste and wet waste.This will prevent dumping of waste in pathways which will restrict diseases and bad odour to spread.
Thank you for your consideration
Yours faithfully,
Sumit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39473684211 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84263640261 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.731578947368 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.532814718 44.8134815571 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.125 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197042078632 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818692907779 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735926340168 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12560658545 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718883674227 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 8.37731958763 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 8.71597938144 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.