The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.Write a letter to the local council. In your letter-Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working p

Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to you regarding the complaints about rubbish collection in our area that we have received over the past few months. Additionally, I would like to share my opinion about how to address this issue.
My neighbourhood has stated their dissatisfaction with the rubbish collection and most of the complaints were due to the inaccurate time when the garbage is collected. It happens once in a week and every time the day and time is different. Last week the rubbish was collected on Friday at 9 o'clonk in the morning, whereas the previous week garbage collectors came Thurdsay night around 6 p.m.
The neighbours have been showing their concerns and irratation about now knowing when to store the garbage outside. Needless to say, the rubbish collection in our area is very important considering the amount of people living in our neighbourhood.
Taking this into consideration, I suggest to make a strict system that can be used for rubbish collection. Moreover, if there are to be any changes in the schedule, then people are notified of them 2 days in advance.
I am hoping that you would look into these recent complaints and implement the suggested changes to better serve the inhabitants and to keep our reputation intact.
Yours Sincerely,
Jane Brooks

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, regarding, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95852534562 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88214127066 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635944700461 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9365553554 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207235906773 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742782847087 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555759514907 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890311503809 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385978182542 0.0580467560999 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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