TASK 1: You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town which is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter,
• Correct the information in the article
• Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
• Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Mr. Lee,
I just finished reading the article‘Unknown things about Jalandhar’, in the thirteenth edition you quarterly travel magazine, Bon Voyage. I am an avid reader and have been following your publication from quite long now.
In the sixth line of the third paragraph of the article, you have made a mention of a religious place, Devi TalaabMandir and have stated it as one of the newly built temples in the city. I have been residing in this town from more than two decades and have been visiting this temple since then. I want to correct you by stating that this place is believed to be older than 200 years. For your reference and ease, I am giving a link which will authenticate my concern. You may like to visit the temple’s website at https://devitalabmandir.com/
To the best of my knowledge I know that you sell more than 300,000 copies of this magazine every year and see the magnitude of the response when people across the world would readincorrect information about a place which happened to be so old. There are certain beliefs and religious sentiments attached to such places. I am really afraid how the public would react to the error made by your team. You might be aware of the instances, in the past, where, in response to such mistakes, people turned into an agitated mob and held demonstration outside the publishing company.
Beinga responsible citizen, it is my prime dutyto bring this to your notice so that a necessary action can be taken at your end. I would request you that in your next edition, you may like to seek an apology from the readers and assure them that such mistakes will never be repeated in future.
I look forward for a positive feedback from your side.
Yours sincerely,
Navpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 284, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...at such mistakes will never be repeated in future. I look forward for a positive feed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, really, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 937.175257732 156% => OK
No of words: 304.0 206.0 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80592105263 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9277258264 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 127.690721649 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 290.88556701 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2806322324 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.357142857 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239106219033 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744409233064 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363157747419 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12265786698 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475377315594 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.