A telephone company made a mistake about sending your bill to the wrong address.
• Write a letter to the account manager to complain and explain
• what problem this caused
• what do you would like them to do
Dear Sir,
I am Shreyas Parab, the resident of Indralok, Bhayander. I am writing this letter to draw your immediate attention to update my wrongly mentioned address in your database. As a result, I have not received the bill's, and payments have got delayed from my end.
On 2nd January, I received a call from your company to pay the bill along with penalised charges. Since I have not received any bills pertaining to the number the use, I was not aware of any due need to be clear. After all, I do not agree that it is my fault, that address updated in your system has an error. I should not be penalised for late due's.
I would like to request you to send the revised bill, removing all the penalty charges, on my address: 203, Shiv Dhara, Miraroad - 123345. The copy of address-proof is also attached to the letter. On receipt of the bill, I will clear all my dues.
I look forward to a keen action on this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, after all, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45454545455 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45902291683 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7425776152 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3333333333 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197151097261 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638439751424 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590660355058 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102697092463 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406282606992 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.