Dear Sam,
I am writing this letter to propose my suggestions on your concerning about the repception area issues. Upon having read your last letter with this problem, I immediately went there for investigation. As you metioned in the letter, I found there are several flaws at our reception area accoding to the complaints.
Firstly, some clients felt frustrated with our reception area where is small and shady. I found it is necessary to refurbish the reception area with comfortable chairs and lights. Besides, based on the visiting record I found our clients would have to wait for 30 minutes at our reception area, which was also mentioned in the suggestion book by them. In this case, we should establish an online dating schedule thus new customers would not have to wait in front our company's door together. Instead, they can select a suitable time coming for visit..
As a consluting company, reception service gives the first impression on our potential clients. Thus this place should be valued greatly by us. I kindly suggest you can consider my solutions to the reception issues.
Thank you for reading my letter, I am truthfully looking forward your reply.
Sincerely,
Tony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... select a suitable time coming for visit.. As a consluting company, reception s...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...st impression on our potential clients. Thus this place should be valued greatly by ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68734331647 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1667161916 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294598302754 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989950518392 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075511730086 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186373444111 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998375647691 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.