There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Describe the complaints that have been made
Say why the reception are is important
Suggest how the reception area could be improved
Dear Mr. Lopez
I am writing with regard to some complaints that have been made by some newcomers to the company. These complaints could have negative effects on the company's background, indeed. The complaints was made about the assistants who are responsible for welcoming to visitors. As well as this, the reception seems too untidy and bad-designed.
It is clear that the reception area is the most significant part of the company. This is because this is the first area in which people enter. An appropriate reception could attract the attention of visitors as quickly as we want. If it cannot attract visitors, we will dramatically lose our costumers over time.
There are several remedies to improve the reception area. Firstly, we could get some professional designers to make some effective changes into the decoration. Secondly, it will be helpful if we set some meetings in order to teach reception assistants how they have to behave toward visitors.
If there is anything else I can do, just let me know.
Yours sincerely,
Sarah Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[5]
Message: You should probably use: 'were'.
Suggestion: were
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13218390805 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79464623207 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66091954023 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9929439674 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.6923076923 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3846153846 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26136482582 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857393844859 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060887262707 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106131273647 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638086147534 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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