You have recevied a letter from your local video shop claiming that a DVD you rented is now overdue. However, you have already returned the DVD. Write to the video shop. In your letter
Tell them which film the letter is about
Explain when you returned it
Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation
Dear Mr. Lopez,
I am writing with regard to a DVD you have asked me about in your letter which I had received from your shop. First of all, it is necessary to remind you that I rented a comedy film named Funny Moments on the 3rd of July. Then I returned it the following week on the 10th of July according to your shop’s rules. In addition, when I wanted to return the DVD, I could not find you in the shop and just your assistant was there. Therefore, I handed it to him.
When I received your letter, I got so surprised. As you know, I have always been one of your on time costumers.
It might be a mistake by your assistant because when I arrived at the shop to return the DVD, he was too busy and the shop was too crowded. On top of these, he was calling on the phone. Could you check your inventory once again and ask your assistant carefully. It is possible, he has forgotten where he has put the DVD. If you find it, please inform me.
I expect to hear good news from you.
Sincerely yours,
Sarah Smith
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, therefore, as for, as to, in addition, mind you, you know, first of all, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21105527638 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26033479959 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603015075377 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0146826907 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.8571428571 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456820640345 0.216113520407 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137476507088 0.0766984524023 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102964283238 0.0603063233224 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272744005467 0.12726935374 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111880027274 0.0580467560999 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.