There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter,
-describe the complaints that have been made
-say why the reception area is important
-suggest how the reception area could be improved
Dear Mrs. Karin,
I am writing with regards to our Meriton Hotel which recently got a few negative feedback about our reception area. People say that there is not enough space to sit down and also it seems a bit unclean from the floor and the walls.
The reception area is important as it reflects the hotel overall maintenance. When people notice in the first thing that welcoming area is untidy they would not sign in and we can lose costumers due to that. Also, the area should have a welcoming and inviting sitting area for customers to relax.
I suggest buying a bigger and cozier couch and a little table with magazines for people to sit and wait. Spring cleaning should be done at least every month to leave a beautiful clean feeling. We could add even some flowers or plants to make it nicer. Hopefully, my suggestions were helpful and we could make our reception for a better place.
Yours sincerely,
Sabrina Lucas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mrs. Karin, I am writing with regards to our Meriton...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, at least, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69696969697 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33069508465 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684848484848 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8737455507 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180303460841 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624952732225 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054226163539 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932661445445 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256753265508 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.