Dear Sir,
I am writing to bring to your notice that bus services of your company has stopped at bus bay no. 56 of the Great hill Area.i request you to mitigate the issue as soon as possible
Since few weeks it is observed by all of the commuters of the area that your bus service especially, in morning hours never arrives on time. The bus service earlier was reliable and every individual managed his time dependently in accordance with the service.
Now, the routine time schedule of the bus reaching at specified time for service deliverable is an issue since last two weeks. Your bus service was known for its reliability and I am afraid that it is getting affected as many local dwellers are unsatisfied and complaining about it.
Moreover, public is upset the way the bus service is taken the area bus bay for granted impacting them in their delayed travelling to offices and work places. Since almost a week children are not going to school because of lack of bus transportation service in the area.
I look forward to see your immediate action towards the issue and request you to do the needful.
Yours faithfully,
Rasheed raheel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t bus bay no. 56 of the Great hill Area.i request you to mitigate the issue as so...
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Line 4, column 35, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...le Since few weeks it is observed by all of the commuters of the area that your bus ser...
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Line 4, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ndently in accordance with the service. Now, the routine time schedule of the bu...
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Line 8, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... granted impacting them in their delayed travelling to offices and work places. S...
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...service in the area. I look forward to see your immediate action towards the issue...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, well, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78606965174 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54894417515 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621890547264 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6986196473 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.888888889 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219809345683 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098864438426 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307225160489 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120611186401 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401426952925 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.