Dear Sir/Madam
Through this letter, I would like to express my immense dissatisfaction and dejection concerning the tribulations caused to me and other daily commuters by your public transport company. Numerous routine passengers face enormous problems due to inadequate and unscheduled time table of your buses.
Considering the factual information, I am a regular commuter of your bus services. Many times, buses do not reach the proposed destinations according to the framed schedule causing inconvenience to the commuter. Numerous times, I had to travel in a taxi that considerably cost more. Moreover, enumerable people complaint about the non-availability of the bus drivers and their spontaneous negligence towards their duties. On certain occasions, drivers were found driving rashly in drunken state. Such hilarious carelessness on part of the drivers impose threat to the passengers.
Moreover
Comprehensibly, I would like to suggest some preventive measures for your betterment. Firstly, your company should add more buses for the betterment of commuters. Moreover, highly professional and competent drivers should be recruited in order to ensure safety of the passengers. I hope you would implement the suggestions for the convenience of your customers.
Thanking you in anticipation
Yours faithfully
Samuel Gill
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...of your bus services. Many times, buses dont reach the proposed destinations accordi...
^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ivers impose threat to the passengers. Moreover Comprehensibly, I would like to sugges...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86153846154 4.54256449028 129% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22385911403 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687179487179 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9195511137 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9230769231 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177918287136 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498157640864 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496753991139 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868788251073 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085766757691 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 8.71597938144 185% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 7.59969072165 140% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 41.2886597938 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...of your bus services. Many times, buses dont reach the proposed destinations accordi...
^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ivers impose threat to the passengers. Moreover Comprehensibly, I would like to sugges...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86153846154 4.54256449028 129% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22385911403 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687179487179 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9195511137 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9230769231 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177918287136 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498157640864 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496753991139 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868788251073 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085766757691 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 8.71597938144 185% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 7.59969072165 140% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 41.2886597938 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.