Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention some issues which are encountered with your current public transport. Let me explain the situation in detail.
First of all, buses never follow consistent timings as per the defined schedule that inevitably causes trouble for us to align and rely on it. Besides, drivers do not accept cash and prohibits entry into the bus which is unacceptable. Most of the seat covers, on the other hand, are torn with colour fading gradually.
Due to above problems, regular commuters like students and professionals reach late at their workplace or schools and unable to maintain work-life balance. Personally, I tried using a cab as an alternative but the prices are unreasonable.
It would be much appreciated if you could address these concerns promptly because a majority of people depends on public transportation system to travel. I would suggest a refurbishment of seats and expect a reprimand towards your staff so that cash becomes acceptable in case of opal card unavailability. Lastly, a scheduled timetable regarding all the available vehicles would be of great help.
I hope to see an improved service in upcoming days.
Yours faithfully,
Pardeep Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to bring to your attention ...
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...ilable vehicles would be of great help. I hope to see an improved service in upc...
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... in upcoming days. Yours faithfully, Pardeep Kumar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, lastly, regarding, so, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22727272727 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95861758573 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.762626262626 0.622605031667 122% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4577540709 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153697450538 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448485627387 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767386379221 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708994157571 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964594403064 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.