There have been some problems with public transportation in your area recently.
Write a letter to the management of the public transport company. In your letter
describe the problems
explain how these problems are affecting the public
suggest some changes that could be made
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to report the problems we have been experiencing with your public transportation services in Victoria Island, for the past one month.
The major issue is that the current number of buses plying our routes are not enough. The vehicles were reduced from fifty to twenty, causing so many people to have to wait for the motors to do a number of trips before they can join one. As a result, many people arrive at their destinations, later than planned. Also, some of the vehicles, because of poor maintenance, break down before they could complete their first trip, leaving many people stranded.
As a result of lateness to work, many people have been served warning letters and a few others relieved of their duties. Also, traders from neighboring cities have shunned our markets because of the disappointments they have experienced with our transport system, and the consequence is a hike in the price of goods and services.
In view of these challenges, I would suggest that you replace the motors with at least, thirty new ones. Also, I will advise that your company retrains your current set of mechanics and hire new competent hands to compliment the old ones.
I believe that if these suggestions are implemented, it will help arrest these problems.
Yours faithfully,
Okoronkwo Alfred Chinedu.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...destinations, later than planned. Also, some of the vehicles, because of poor maintenance, ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'at least', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234126984127 0.220444632235 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.18253968254 0.167888034529 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0674603174603 0.0606518309736 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.031746031746 0.0506257000042 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0753968253968 0.118615021944 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130952380952 0.107062808482 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0634920634921 0.041066498444 155% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65771643195 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277777777778 0.0385302599488 72% => OK
Particles: 0.00396825396825 0.00132118243153 300% => OK
Determiners: 0.0873015873016 0.0714148451538 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0198412698413 0.0191574576366 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1347.0 1141.60824742 118% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.134020619 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01339285714 5.53046319177 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78085437643 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357142857143 0.284621296913 125% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241071428571 0.211203875043 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138392857143 0.133321485273 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.09375 0.0843313296314 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65771643195 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622163163488 103% => OK
Word variations: 68.9532355598 62.8969750728 110% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3636363636 16.4300151701 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1762061531 44.7399317507 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.454545455 90.9928171075 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 16.4300151701 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.613754768223 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 44.4707792208 37.5504026743 118% => OK
Elegance: 1.47945205479 1.13073093955 131% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407229446264 0.331212695627 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100382883419 0.0927372745006 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0474558155282 0.0736520305886 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.706332695431 0.579516596996 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.221183716965 0.180689518051 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14612343917 0.122183219658 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980774263367 0.0765303033291 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.167416154822 0.211926503985 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.120951734546 0.0737400523855 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19422998561 0.203819188451 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12066066254 0.067151250289 180% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.48453608247 269% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 1.03092783505 291% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.