There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:
– Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is
– Say what happened the last times you complained
– Explain what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the sports center located in F9 Park. Where I spent a week recently for Intercollege swimming competition. Let me elaborate on the situation in more detail.
I want to bring into your notice the poor condition of the changing room. There was a foul smell in the room. it seemed that the area was not cleaned for a long time. Also, the towels were soiled and damped. The whole room was very unhygienic. I complained to the facilitator about the maintenance. But the problem was ignored rather than being resolved. Such a response has disappointed me as it is a basic hygiene issue
I wish you to personally analyze the matter. Make strict policies with respect to the cleanliness of the room. Washing of towels should be done every day. Secondly, to vanish bad smell, ventilators should be installed and room freshener should be used every single day.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, second, secondly, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94152046784 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78954111263 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695906432749 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8684209974 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.3333333333 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234041853663 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597397962956 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563001414203 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107505459439 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305227030446 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.19 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.