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The reading states three ways to address the decline of torreya, a type of evergreen tree that is at the brink of extinction. but the professor expresses his doubts regarding the success of the proposed methods.
The first method the reading suggests was to reestablish torreya in the same location where it thrived for thousands of years i.e, northern florida. northern florida has a microclimate suitable for torreya's growth. this microclimate is wetter and cooler than the surrounding region's relatively dry and warm climate. And the ongoing work by the scientists suggests that cool and damp areas are very suitable for the growth of torreya. but the professor points out that it is unlikely that this plan would work. he states that the microclimate is getting drier and warmer by the day. this is due to increased global warming. A lot of wetlands have been drained out in the recent past. hence, warm and dry microclimate may not foster the growth of torreya.
The second option was to move torreya into a new location, completely different from the previous one to help the torreya thrive. The professor provides the example of black locust trees to disagree with the reading. he explains the proliferation of black locust trees in the new location and how that implicated in the destruction of several other plants and trees. These destroyed plants and trees were very close to extinction themselves. hence, the professor states that this particular method could have unpredicted outcomes, which may or may not work in our favor.
The third option was to preserve torreya in research centers by moving the seeds and saplings from the wild and preserving them in a closely monitored environment. The professor expresses his concerns regarding this. he talks about how in a non-biodiverse environment such as labs, it would be very hard for torreya to resist diseases. but in a setting such as forests, they are more resilient due to the presence of huge biodiversity.
this way, the professor casts his doubts on the solutions provided by the reading to protect torreya taxifolia.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...roclimate suitable for torreyas growth. this microclimate is wetter and cooler than ...
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...ery suitable for the growth of torreya. but the professor points out that it is unl...
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... is unlikely that this plan would work. he states that the microclimate is getting...
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...ry hard for torreya to resist diseases. but in a setting such as forests, they are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, regarding, second, so, third, as for, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 937.175257732 188% => OK
No of words: 347.0 206.0 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08933717579 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74516817509 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 127.690721649 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533141210375 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 290.88556701 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 10.0 0.824742268041 1212% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7146892631 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0952380952 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5238095238 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.216113520407 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0766984524023 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.12726935374 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 41.2886597938 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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