topic about torn books

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topic about torn books

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am baljit singh.I have membership of surrey central library with membership number 125.I am writing a epistle about damage book which i got yesterday.I had hold two ielts Cambridge book in last month but i got it yesterday,when i read one book which is missing some pages.
it is ielts 11 which is very useful for ielts exam and the answer key of this book is missing.I think last ten pages torn away.We cannot confirm about our solution without correct answers.it has a large waiting for this book mostly people use this book for exam preparation but without answers it is not helpful for preparation.
All books are important but some time careless persons do not proper care of theses assets and due to this reason many people suffer from it.I request to you please check all books before receiving the members.If anyone become damage any book then charge a heavy fine from member.you should make a notice in library hall that everyone do not take book without checking.After that library will not responsible for that.
Tomorrow,I will deposit this book and please change it in same addition.

Thanking you.

Your Sincerely,
baljit

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95408163265 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51655803593 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658163265306 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 16.3608247423 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.635197471 44.8134815571 358% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.2 76.5299724578 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.2 16.8248392259 233% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250907376427 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094007359067 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722641168318 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142193312438 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035420283158 0.0580467560999 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 8.37731958763 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 70.7449484536 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 7.45979381443 232% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 8.62886597938 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 8.54432989691 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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