Topic: A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept this invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
- Thank him for the invitation.
- Explain why you cannot come.
- Ask him about other time to visit.
Dear Heidon,
I am writing to thank you for your invitation. It’s very kind of you but unfortunately I won’t be able to make it due to my hectic work schedule.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. I’ve recently started a new position as a medical information specialist responsible for COVID-19 vaccine project. Currently I’m under an intensive training program for new employees which consists of online modules, live-coaching sessions along with relevant quizzes. I need to pass all required courses and assessments before going live. Hence, I have necessarily paid all attention to pass the probation by the end of the training program.
Could you let me know of another time you will be free? I’d love to come and stay. I am very interested in seeing your tropical orchid garden you have grown, meeting your wife, Annie and playing with your son, Tommy. I’ll be free in New Year and Christmas holidays or I can take a vacation in winter. I’d certainly like to escape the cold winter to visit you then!
Please let me know,
Your friend,
Timothy
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- Topic A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him her on your next holiday You are too busy to accept this invitation Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank him for the invitation Explain why you cannot come 78
- Topic A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him her on your next holiday You are too busy to accept this invitation Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank him for the invitation Explain why you cannot come 78
- Topic A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him her on your next holiday You are too busy to accept this invitation Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank him for the invitation Explain why you cannot come 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...Annie and playing with your son, Tommy. I’ll be free in New Year and Christmas ho...
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Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ays or I can take a vacation in winter. I’d certainly like to escape the cold win...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96721311475 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65544535034 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704918032787 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6670454526 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260486237894 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088560738267 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791987221407 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162759657513 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845086699058 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.