There's a famous saying "There's no place like home". Its a genuine feeling and cannot be replaced at all. Some people claim that they migrate to other countries searching for greener pastures.This change can bring about various benefits well as drawbacks for an individual
To begin with, a recent study conducted suggests that the proportion of people migrating from developing countries to developed or industrialized countries have significantly increased, approximately three fold.This phenomenon mainly occurs in search of better employment opportunities and improved lifestyle factors. Apparently burgeoning of industries provide better job opportunities in developed nations. Now a days a lot of people are seen crossing borders to continue their education Where they meet individuals from various culture and backgrounds. This atmosphere help them develop their social skills which later mould them in to a better human being responsible and independent, capable of making better decisions, and, thus lead a drool worthy life.
Furthermore, people when move from one country to another get to meet new people and learn new cultures and values. They get to learn new language which in turn aids in building great interpersonal relationships. Recent decades have also shown a great percentage of people migrating from war torn countries; which is mainly to escape the chaotic environment. This group of people travel in order to live a peaceful and better life.
In addition to the various benefits, this process can also bring about huge changes in an individuals life. Families migrating can face wide range of difficulties in the new country. For instance each member of the family will have have to work really hard in order to set up a home and, this can get harder for older adults. due to the heavy work and differences in the physical environment older people may end up getting sick and ill. To add on, learning a new language can become difficult for adults which later on turn out to be a great factor affecting the psychological state of an individual. The family will have to leave behind their culture and tradition and imbibe a novel one in order to be accepted by the people thereby affecting their mental and emotional health.The country itself gets affected when all the efficient and capable people leave for betterment of their lives, thus stagnating its economic growth.
In summary, migration has turned out to be a phenomenon which cannot be stopped but can be controlled if the governments of the developing countries provide better options and facilities for its people. But, since the governments fail to improvise the facilities , and, benefits of migration outweigh its hazards, people would continue leaving a country searching for better opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 5.05154639175 337% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 26.3917525773 239% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2368.0 937.175257732 253% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 445.0 206.0 216% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32134831461 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 3.78020617076 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93149752402 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 127.690721649 190% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54606741573 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 290.88556701 250% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.566940242 44.8134815571 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.555555556 76.5299724578 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7222222222 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0726482914879 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0207484846778 0.0766984524023 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316258453608 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0440944200937 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014128210023 0.0580467560999 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 8.37731958763 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 8.71597938144 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 41.2886597938 279% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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