Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to explain about the incessant noise making by the Fox Road reconstruction team as a citizen who have lived in this street for 20 years.
I totally understand the importance of this work because this road need to be fixed already. Previously, there were also other kinds of public construtions working in this road.Those working teams did great jobs and never bother the neighbours too much here. Now, the workers in the team are working from days to nights, especially the noise made by the road machines which is totally intolerable. This disturbing situation never happens before, lots of people including me could not sleep at night.
For one thing, we would like our road in font of our homes to be rebuild since that brings more traffic conveniences. On the other thing,could you please reconsider alternating the working time? Such as no work at night, the whole working schedule would be extened but we can accept this extension.
Thank you for your help in advance, I am waiting for your correspondence.
Your faithfully,
Tony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Those
...ublic construtions working in this road.Those working teams did great jobs and never ...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , could
...traffic conveniences. On the other thing,could you please reconsider alternating the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, such as, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93406593407 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73730065529 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697802197802 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5741705732 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168707969439 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708443486797 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419039499106 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104617644667 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333750576596 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.