Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to look for your help with my missing papers in your hotel room. They are so important for me that I could not graduate without them.
My professor and I attened the IEEE conference last week which held in 14/15th July. Upon arriving home, I found my papers were lost. Then I tried to remember everything in the two days at your hotel. In that there were some valuable revisions of several famous professors after the meeting, I should leave them in the drawer of the table in my room 202. Due to the professors' editing suggestiongs, these papers must be found since the professors gave me lots of constructive ideas, which would help me finish my thesis next month.
In this case, can you kindly help me to find them? Once you got my papers, please contact me with my phone : XXX. Besides, please mail me as soon as possible which the delivery fee will be covered by myself.
Thank you for your help in advance. I am truthfully looking forward your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Tony
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 30, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
... month. In this case, can you kindly help me to find them? Once you got my papers, please c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61290322581 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36558344078 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672043010753 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7314288564 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20253486443 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741315087787 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611082180589 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128057677124 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310924261391 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 30, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
... month. In this case, can you kindly help me to find them? Once you got my papers, please c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61290322581 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36558344078 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672043010753 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7314288564 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20253486443 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741315087787 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611082180589 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128057677124 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310924261391 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.