Dear Josephin,
Hope you and your family are doing great and how is work? Astonishingly, I have nominated to make a seminar presentation on the cloud technology based subject at the ITC Chola Grand Residency on 25th of march,2020 by 10a.m.
The CEO of Tata Consultancy Services and few committee members are the guest of honour of the presentation. I planned to do a deliberate practice to rehearse presenation at my residing place and I need the projector for the same in which I am seeking your help to fix this. I hope you should be able to affix this as earlier as possible.
I planned to delineate the information in the form of tiny booklet to the attendants. Please do me a favour for this preparation to get it done on time. This would be very kind of you and a timely help.
I am eagerly waiting for your response.
Best Regards,
Selvi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'march 2020'.
Suggestion: march 2020
...he ITC Chola Grand Residency on 25th of march,2020 by 10a.m. The CEO of Tata Consultanc...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...should be able to affix this as earlier as possible. I planned to delineate the...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o affix this as earlier as possible. I planned to delineate the information in...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 715.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64285714286 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87668200814 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649350649351 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 74.6370642377 43.030603864 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4444444444 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 5.23603664747 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216178731163 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803899679762 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057100521219 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126088073293 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169262148804 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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