Dear sir,
I am writing to let you know about the thing that I lost currently on the bus of your company.
I am one of the passengers of your bus. Actually I got on the Azadi street bus on 13th March on 10 oclock and it's driver was a tall and bald man. To tell the truth, when I was getting off the bus I left my purse, which is extremely valuable for me, on the chair. Actually, when I got that I tried a lot to stop the bus but it did not work.
The thing that I am trying to ask you is being nice enough and ask the driver that I explained his features to you, wether he has seen my purse or not. Since, it is a memento, is very valuable to me and I would be really thankful if you could do something for me.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
FATEMEH BAGHERI
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...he Azadi street bus on 13th March on 10 oclock and its driver was a tall and bald man....
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... The thing that I am trying to ask you is being nice enough and ask the driver th...
^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, FATEMEH BAGHERI
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, really, so, you know, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 647.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.96932515337 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12940887918 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61963190184 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5557156577 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8888888889 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303585939006 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12149435381 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739469462798 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182978048897 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09120218864 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.45 8.71597938144 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.08 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.