Dear MR Smith
I am writing to express my complain about some issues in our neighbourhood. In fact, I rented this apartment about two month ago.
As it was uttered in advance, I work in a hospital as a nurse in night shifts. So, I strongly need to take a rest after coming back from work. But, last day when I was going to get sleep, I just found it so noisy. And, the origin of that was due to children's neighbour who were playing game so loudly.
As it is not the first time which is happening, in spite of my willingness, I am going to ask for a new apartment which can be more suitable for me in comparison to present one. I am writing to ask you for sending somebody out to assist me with moving. Also, I would be thankful if you could do it as soon as possible.
I look forward hearing from you.
yours faithfully,
FATEMEH BAGHERI
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...fact, I rented this apartment about two month ago. As it was uttered in advance, I...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rst time which is happening, in spite of my willingness, I am going to ask for a ...
^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... I look forward hearing from you. yours faithfully, FATEMEH BAGHERI
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, in fact, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25153374233 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49075221331 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674846625767 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1412314602 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139857270731 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538450236198 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601030218804 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845788467726 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565055145742 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.