Write a letter to a city planning manager about demolition of a historical building in your area and say
– Explain why it shouldn’t be demolished.
– Suggest a future use for this building.
– Recommend a way to raise money for repairs.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter about, demolition of only historical building in our city on which we are feeling so proud. I was born and brought up in this area only when we were small my grandmother used to tell us history behind this building but now when I read news about demolition, I was heart-broken and felt speech less.
About 600 years ago, when Romans came to this city and started business here, they build this first building as their head quarter, moreover, to build this structure they specially called skilled worker from Rome. Whenever I see this one it reminds me of all the history ans stories which has been told by me grandmother. Nowadays, museums are very useful to learn history so if you keep this building then in future government could make this as a history museum which help our community to learn about our rich history and culture.
When I visited last year I saw some part of the building need to be repaired. Although I know municipality of town need strong budget to do so but we are lack of budget. However, If we ask some archaeologist group or charity for funding they surely could help even we could ask people in our community to give donation.
Yours Faithfully,
Jessica Max
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng this letter about, demolition of only historical building in our city on which...
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Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cially called skilled worker from Rome. Whenever I see this one it reminds me of all the...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t our rich history and culture. When I visited last year I saw some part of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74208144796 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48493340835 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5144266929 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.444444444 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193117763374 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744569231297 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568068675429 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121970505039 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561535040365 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.