Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing a dangerous situation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the dangerous situation that some of the local adolescents have caused for the residents of my neighborhood.
These young children let their dogs run without any leashes which would be a severe danger for the residents of this area. It is true that their pets get trained to behave well, but the reaction of the animals is not predictable and they would attack the pedestrians due to their smell or color of the clothes or any other things. Furthermore, it is illegal to walk animals without leash.
I would like to ask for your consideration in order to warn them about the consequences of their immature behavior. Since many of the elderly members of the neighbors are afraid of walking in the area and it turns to a problem for the residents.
I look forward to hearing from you and hope you take some steps to tackle the problem.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...lain about the dangerous situation that some of the local adolescents have caused for the r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, look, so, well, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75460122699 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60635852218 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650306748466 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5214242 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258299361733 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854410799446 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107283902596 0.0603063233224 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146501035037 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126011847433 0.0580467560999 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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