Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing dangerous circumstances.
Dear Sir,
I am Pallavi Sharma, resident of Gillco Valley, Chandigarh. I am writing to draw your attention towards the issue recently developing in the locatality, and requires to be resolved at earliest.
While exercising, at the society garden in the morning, I have noticed some youngsters at the place with their pet without leash. Uncontrolled dogs create nuisance around along with harming the cleanliness of the place. To worsen the situation, dog-owners do competitive racing among the dogs and rashly running dogs making others frighten. Despite the repetitive requests made to them, no proper action has been taken by them.
If the situation cannot be controlled on time, I can foresee the dangers associated, as the behavior of animals is unpredictable, and any mishap can take place. Moreover, the garden is the place that belongs to every age-group, for relaxing, walking, playing and other activities alike. However, the presence of unmanageable tamed animals adversely affecting the denizens.
So, for the security of the masses, I urge you to look into the matter promptly and draw some guidelines or timings for animal-owners so that greater mess can be avoided.
Yours sincerely,
Pallavi Sharma.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32642487047 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87703369482 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.699481865285 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.70272376 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4545454545 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108330953385 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321788201141 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389617751659 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523779447438 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386611718373 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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