Write a letter of complaint to a company outlining a problem you had while while visiting one of their stores. In your letter include:
- why the problem was
- why this problem has upset you
- what you want to happen as a result of your letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I feel the need to bring to your attention an issue I have with the manner in which you stage your product. Allow me to elaborate on.
Last Sunday, while shopping at your Landmark Building, I noticed that your digital center was playing an extremely graphic movie to demonstrate the visual capability of a new television model. The day I was in your store, my children were exposed to the violence that you allowed to be screened. I am aware children are not your company's target, but you have to acknowledge that they do visit your stores regularly with their parents.
I trust you can empathize with my situation. Thus, I am expecting you to take immediate action by changing the material you use in your displays. I am also hoping you to reprimand the members of your team responsible for allowing such an oversight to happen.
Your timely attention to this matter is needed.
Haki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, thus, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5974747352 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66875 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9483684035 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4444444444 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261737329424 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109207969861 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483289172006 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153560322727 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502070048403 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.