Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter· advise them of your situation· explain how this is affecting you· request a new card

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter

· advise them of your situation

· explain how this is affecting you

· request a new card

Dear Sir,

Hope this letter finds you in good health.

i’m writing this letter to inform you, I lost my wallet couple of days back which had my student id in it. this was lost somewhere in cafeteria I looked around, asked some people but no luck. A formal police complaint was made same day as it contained my driver license and credit cards. The purpose for writing this letter is I don’t have any id on me, i’m unable to use the university facilities due to which my studies are being compromised. I went to administration department to get my replacement, but they refused to provide me as I didn’t have any id on me to proof my identity.

We have exams coming up, I don’t want to stress out myself on this, I will be thankful if you can please get my id request approved.

Attached is the police report.

Yours sincerely.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
...his letter finds you in good health. i'm writing this letter to inform you, I ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ys back which had my student id in it. this was lost somewhere in cafeteria I looke...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d. Attached is the police report. Yours sincerely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64935064935 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68291069222 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2431608337 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162436941051 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787190705574 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718813468328 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917757133988 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692445438429 0.0580467560999 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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