Dear Suresh,
I hope this letter of mine finds you in great spirits. The purpose of my letter to you revolves around 'Helpline', a charity organization formed by the students of my college which aims to provide financial support to the poor who are undergoing treatment in the City Government Hospital.
You should know that, off late, I am deeply connected with Helpline. It pains me to see the down-trodden people of our community being deprived of even the most basic health-care due to the inflated costs of the latter. Helpline has provided me with a medium where I can contribute towards that part of our society which is in dire need of monetary help.
It would be a great gesture of yours towards the needy if you can contribute a modest sum of three hundred rupees to Helpline at this moment as we are running short of money.
Hoping to hear fom you soon. Take care.
Yours sincerely,
Janu.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71875 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55311543756 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5825200873 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.375 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117357595729 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409782844163 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285324574293 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597948319842 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322075816204 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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