In today’s modern world, life is quite competitive and tough; people have to mould them according to the demand of it. Many people have understood this concept and have been trying to adopt various methods to survive. On the other hand there are large number of people who think that it is not necessary to change as per the need of the society because of their traditional customs and values. In my opinion it is essential to bring in some necessary changes in oneself in order to keep up with the rest of the world or to sustain.
To begin with, it is important to have some of the following qualities to achieve success in modern world such as ability to plan and organize. Today, time is most precious thing in the world; if one does not value time then it is almost impossible to achieve one’s goal in life. Life is short and the time span of youth is even shorter, this is the crucial time to attain one’s goal and becoming successful. I can say this strongly as I am able to recall about one of my friends. He was careless, he never used to plan anything neither for exams in college nor did he do any planning for his future. He wasted all his valuable time in experimenting things. Eventually, at the age of thirty five also he was struggling to make a good career. Hence, it is recommended to plan everything for a good future.
Also, when a person plans, she/he is able to predict the difficulties that might come across in his/her way and so she/he can prepare oneself better for all those challenges and overcome them with not much trouble. For example when I started establishing my own business I did a lot of planning with the help of experts and so I made myself ready to face the anticipated problems that could occur. As a result, I was able to get desired output without much hassle as compared to peers that were not so well planned and organized. This not only made me a successful businessman but indeed made me more confident that facilitated me throughout my life to achieve my dreams.
To recapitulate, I would like to suggest that though many other virtues like diligence, intelligence and honesty are required to be a successful person but at the same time it is mandatory to be a good planner and organizer to fulfill one’s desires and dreams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e/he is able to predict the difficulties that might come across in his/her way an...
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... fulfill one's desires and dreams.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.190889370933 0.229887763892 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.175704989154 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0932754880694 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0498915401302 0.046263068375 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0737527114967 0.0685040099705 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110629067245 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0325379609544 0.0351676179071 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62701120903 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.060737527115 0.0309702414327 196% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00216919739696 0.00188951952338 115% => OK
Determiners: 0.0737527114967 0.0887237588012 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0108459869848 0.0209618222197 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0130151843818 0.0139019557991 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2306.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 414.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57004830918 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.311594202899 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234299516908 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135265700483 0.174417080927 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0942028985507 0.112833075102 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62701120903 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 62.5137507441 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 24.3529411765 20.5533526081 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8267758584 48.84282405 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.647058824 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3529411765 20.5533526081 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.644075263715 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 47.7828928673 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.11594202899 1.45489161554 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402679726601 0.300154397459 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133981935212 0.103427244359 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0933298340036 0.0752933317313 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.525259792871 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169805818637 0.151897553556 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163446194839 0.114077575197 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979616706215 0.0781384742642 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.362331415635 0.336927656856 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0989291436423 0.067059652881 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274268557696 0.210909579961 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792939779764 0.0618886996521 128% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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