Write a letter to a friend asking for a recipe from his/her country for the party you are organizing. In your letter
– Tell your friend about the party
– Ask for the recipe
– Explain why you need the recipe from his/her country
Dear Sarah,
I hope this letter finds you well. Sorry that I haven't written for ages, I was busy working and studying and I couldn't spare any time for myself.
I am going to hold a party for my birthday on 25th of August and I invite a group of friends and family members. It would be great if you could
attend the party since we haven't met for a long time.
As you are from Italy and you are a great cook and I believe your pasta has a good taste I want to ask you for the recipe of the pasta that you usually
make at home. I want that recipe which contains fresh vegetables and nuts since some of my guests are vegetarian and they refuse eating meat or pultry.
I would like to cook different types of ethnic foods and international cuisines for the party such as Kebab, fish and pasta that is an Italian dish
and is very well known all over the world and is popular among all nations, I am sure that all the guests would like it.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Best wishes,
Rahi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sarah, I hope this letter finds you well. Sorry...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...his letter finds you well. Sorry that I havent written for ages, I was busy working an...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
..., I was busy working and studying and I couldnt spare any time for myself. I am goin...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... members. It would be great if you could attend the party since we havent met for...
^^^
Line 6, column 27, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...f you could attend the party since we havent met for a long time. As you are from...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., fish and pasta that is an Italian dish and is very well known all over the worl...
^^^
Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e that all the guests would like it. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
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Line 16, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you as soon as possible. Best wishes, Rahi
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.205 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04033698197 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.141127577 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4444444444 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301081167391 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105398517871 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07638286558 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118162833529 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085716427824 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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