Write a letter to a friend expressing your interest to seek employment in a different country. Why you want to work in a different country.What type of work you will be looking for.Questions you have about working in a different country that your friend m

Hi Nicole,

I hope you are doing well and this letter brings you the cheerfulness. I would like to inform that I am planning to look for a job which is suitable for my career in other countries. My main objective is to settle abroad as I have good multilingual and Software architect skills. As abroad have plenty of opportunities for software developers and pay is very high comparatively than our country provides. As you already perceived, I have completed a Bachelor's Degree in IIT Madras and specialized in Computer Science and Engineering.
Moreover, I have scarce knowledge of abroad, so please assist me with the things which would really help me when I get there. Most difficult and essential things certainly need immigrant is dwelling.
I would like to know the online references that are useful to find my needs and specifically mention where can we figure out a temporary apartment. So I request you to provide those details and send the information to the address where I mentioned behind the letter as much as possible. Because I have to buy substances that is for the necessity of life. Your suggestion is going to be helpful for my future endeavors. I am looking forward to receiving mail from you.

With Regards,
Abc

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, really, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84507042254 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89294845127 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3939526168 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3846153846 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162287187482 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555148546563 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462542549588 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987038210968 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616707879868 0.0580467560999 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.