Undoubtedly, tourism is getting growing immensely and people are invading other countries has been proliferating in recent years. The significant reason behind this growth is cost-effective. Moreover, these days people are preferring to visit other countries because they want to experience the diverse culture, foods as well as traditional clothing. This essay explains the benefits and impacts of people making tours in other countries with arguments.
To start with, people who are spending their leisure time in other countries build an opportunity for employment as well as it will culminate the economy point to higher. Moreover, many countries offer tourists to try the hazard games such as snorkeling, scuba diving, and paragliding. So the government would benefit financially because the price of special events is immensely high. Thereby, the nation would spend the money to make the environment better so it will lead to making a way for more people to explore. To exemplify, in Rockville Washington D.C surrounding areas are notorious for sky diving, according to the survey in August 2019, 67% of tourists are interesting to participate in this event.
On the flip side, the cons of increasing tourism impact the nation's culture, environment and sometimes it makes the tension between countries. Furthermore, many tourist's attire would not be in the tradition of what the destination countries following and some foods would not be suite their intense system so this makes to admit in the hospital. In addition to that, many environmental issues caused by the people who explored the areas. For instance, usage of plastic bags, smoking, event fire and incautious about nature. As a result, ruining the environment like wildfire.
To sum up the benefits and drawbacks of tourism in a short sentence, even tourism has abundant good things to people to expose, but some people not aware of the nation's rules and regulations prior to their visit. So in the future, the government has to impose the law to make tourists safe and disseminate awareness programs to the people who decide to look around other countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: C
...To exemplify, in Rockville Washington D.C surrounding areas are notorious for sky...
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Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...D.C surrounding areas are notorious for sky diving, according to the survey in August 2019...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25806451613 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83519025185 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560117302053 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6784476991 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0747078509271 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248926730563 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046288706018 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538541547111 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396828122145 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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