Dear Sahil,
First of all, thank you for agreeing to look after my apartment while I’m away from the city. I am writing this letter to inform you about some information and quick tips for your comfortable space at my residence.
As you know, I’ll be going to India to see my mother since it’s been two years without her. Anyways, let me give you the address of my flat. I live on the fourth floor, A block building, Rockwood society, wellington street. My house number is 403. Besides, you’ll find all modern amenities such as a gym, sports complex, and a beautiful garden.
If you need to contact me for any reason during my holiday, please ring my mobile phone. Also, I’ll be available on WhatsApp for instant replying to messages.
Moreover, please ensure to feed my dog twice a day in the morning and evening. Plus, please check that he is drinking fresh water from his bowl. I have kept the dog food on the kitchen slab. Finally, please don’t forget to pick up newspapers from the front door in the morning.
I look forward to seeing you on my return after spending my vacation.
Regards,
Shwatank
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, besides, finally, first, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, such as, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69346733668 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3475566977 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708542713568 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5895085652 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7142857143 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11243505806 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316211875884 0.0766984524023 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485545595194 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580215821653 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630175249056 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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