Dear Leena,
Thanks a million for your letter. I can not tell you how much I am delighted to hear about your visit to India next week.
Recently, I got shifted to Bangalore due to a new job in the company. Here, I have bought a new flat near to the office. It is in a Vijaya Bank Layout, Bangalore. When you are arriving in the city, you will have to stay with me. My house is next to the Forum mall, where we can explore new releases and do lots of shopping. Is it not excited, is it?
As I informed you earlier, Bangalore's weather is better than the other cities. However, it turns a bit colder in October and November months. Therefore, I would recommend you to carry light warm clothes when you visit here.
Since it is your first time in Bangalore, I will show you some famous tourist places here. There, we can explore multiple options ranging from river rafting, mountain trekking, bungee jumping to wild-life centuries.
I am impatiently waiting for your arrival!
See you soon.
Anika
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- You recently encountered some problems with public transportation service in your area Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company and say Where and what were the problems Explain how these problems affect the public Suggest 95
- Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your place next week.1) Describe where he will stay.2) Explain the weather conditions3) Activities will do together. 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 43, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...nce it is your first time in Bangalore, Ill show you some famous tourist places her...
^^^
Line 11, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for your arrival! Miss you, Anika
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57777777778 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40883148763 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677777777778 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0968496544 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.8571428571 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8571428571 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143300606002 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409552511983 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436240276219 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764783605211 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481539434124 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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