Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your place next week.
1) Describe where he will stay.
2) Explain the weather conditions
3) Activities will do together.
Dear Leena,
Thanks a million for your letter. I can not tell you how much I am delighted to hear about your visit to India next week.
Recently, I got shifted to Bangalore due to a new job in the company. Here, I have bought a new flat near to the office. It is in a Vijaya Bank Layout , Bangalore. When you are arriving in the city, you will have to stay with me here. My house is next to the Forum mall, where we can explore new releases and do lots of shopping. Isn't it excited, is it?
As I informed you earlier, Bangalore's weather is better than the other cities. However, it turns a bit colder in October and November months. Therefore, I would recommend you to carry light warm clothes when you visit here.
Since it is your first time in Bangalore, I'll show you some famous tourist places here. There, we can explore multiple options ranging from river rafting, mountain trekking, bungee jumping to wild-life centuries.
I am impatiently waiting for your arrival!
Take care and see you soon.
Anika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... Thanks a million for your letter. I cant tell you how much I am delighted to hea...
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Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...e bought a new flat near to the office. Its in a Vijaya Bank Layout Bangalore. When...
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Line 9, column 326, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Isn't
...e new releases and do lots of shopping. Isnt it excited, is it? Bangalores weat...
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Line 13, column 165, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... colder in October and November months. Id recommend you to carry light warm cloth...
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Line 17, column 7, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...clothes when you visit here. Since its your first time in Bangalore, Ill show ...
^^^
Line 17, column 41, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...Since its your first time in Bangalore, Ill show you some famous tourist places her...
^^^
Line 29, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Take care and see you soon. Anika
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76243093923 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35193052197 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690607734807 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7760935103 44.8134815571 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.5714285714 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9285714286 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14766347757 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429296822284 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418362369168 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652859745559 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508052468913 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.44 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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