Write a letter to a friend You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged 1 Apologize for the damaging product 2 Explain what happened 3 Say how are you going to fix the issue

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Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.
1. Apologize for the damaging product.
2. Explain what happened.
3. Say how are you going to fix the issue.

Dear Adam,
Hi, I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to apologize for the damage that is caused because of my carefulness to your laptop.I borrowed it on 20th of April from you and it is a pity to say that the laptop got damaged on that day. I feel extreme guilty and regret my fault.
I came home and put the laptop on the table near armchairs.You know I have a one-year-old daughter.At that time she did not pay any attention to the laptop and she was playing with her toys.I left my daughter with her toys and went to kitchen in order to make a cup of coffee. After only 2 minutes, I heard high, strange voice.Then, I ran into the room.There my daughter was lying under the table with your laptop.I could not understand how she managed to reach the table.I am so sorry that the screen of the gadget got cracked.
I am going to renovate your laptop as soon as possible.If you do not want to use this laptop ,i am ready to buy new one for you.Please accept my apology and answer which option you would like because i am dying in guilt here.
Waiting for your call
Regards,
Maftuna

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Adam, Hi, I hope you are doing well. I am writ...
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...ecause of my carefulness to your laptop.I borrowed it on 20th of April from you a...
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...hat the laptop got damaged on that day. I feel extreme guilty and regret my fault...
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...el extreme guilty and regret my fault. I came home and put the laptop on the ta...
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...t here. Waiting for your call Regards, Maftuna
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...Waiting for your call Regards, Maftuna
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, i feel, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2619047619 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35856618884 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.6975758478 44.8134815571 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.857142857 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 16.8248392259 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 2.54639175258 903% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229562950437 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10576630124 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107318315539 0.0603063233224 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154685526697 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093949700018 0.0580467560999 162% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.02 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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