Dear Hotel Manager,
Greeting of the day
Subject :- Party arrangements in your hotel.
I am writing this mail to enquire, if it would be possible to host a party in your hotel. If yes, what arrangement can be made for the party.
I came across your hotel's website and saw some of the parties that you have hosted in the past. Your experience really won my vote and confidence. Getting in to details, on coming Sunday 25th of July is my best friends birthday so I am planning to throw a surprise party for him at your birthday. He is coming back to the town after two years, so I want it to be a big party and gather all his friends and family for his special day and surprise him. I understand its a special request as in terms of arrangements, I want it to be a big party without it seaming all a party at all until 23:59 midnight and at 12 starts the birthday bash, making it larger than life. I really want him to remember this day.
I would like to know about all your all inclusive packages and quotations on them. I don't have a strict budget but with that being said I still want value for my money. I feel you are the perfect venue for this celebration.
Looking forward to hear back from you at the earliest.
Regards
Aahil
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar Hotel Manager, Greeting of the day Subject :- Party arrangements in your ho...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...came across your hotels website and saw some of the parties that you have hosted in the pas...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 465, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...cial day and surprise him. I understand its a special request as in terms of arrang...
^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ally want him to remember this day. I would like to know about all your all i...
^
Line 11, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lusive packages and quotations on them. I dont have a strict budget but with that...
^
Line 11, column 86, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...sive packages and quotations on them. I dont have a strict budget but with that bein...
^^^^
Line 11, column 171, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... said I still want value for my money. I feel you are the perfect venue for this...
^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...r this celebration. Looking forward to hear back from you at the earliest. Regar...
^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ack from you at the earliest. Regards Aahil
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, still, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31779661017 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37773353505 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572033898305 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.250335987 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3846153846 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302177054245 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102153749075 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652162454329 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151605565696 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102125475643 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar Hotel Manager, Greeting of the day Subject :- Party arrangements in your ho...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...came across your hotels website and saw some of the parties that you have hosted in the pas...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 465, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...cial day and surprise him. I understand its a special request as in terms of arrang...
^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ally want him to remember this day. I would like to know about all your all i...
^
Line 11, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lusive packages and quotations on them. I dont have a strict budget but with that...
^
Line 11, column 86, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...sive packages and quotations on them. I dont have a strict budget but with that bein...
^^^^
Line 11, column 171, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... said I still want value for my money. I feel you are the perfect venue for this...
^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...r this celebration. Looking forward to hear back from you at the earliest. Regar...
^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ack from you at the earliest. Regards Aahil
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, still, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31779661017 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37773353505 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572033898305 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.250335987 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3846153846 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302177054245 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102153749075 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652162454329 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151605565696 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102125475643 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.