Write a letter to the manager of an international company responding to an advertisement about job.
- Why you would like to do that job
- Skills and experience that you have
- Which department you wish to work into
Dear Sir,
I am, Maulik B Patel resident of India, writing this letter to apply for the job of a production manager for which advertisement has been published in last week newspaper.
I am currently working with renowned MNC of my state "Essar Ltd." for last 7 years. Having a job in your organization, opens up greater rewards for my future career in both aspects experience and financial.
As a production in charge in my recent job, I am aware about the roles and responsibilities for the same. Even I am very efficient and energetic to get effective come out from the optimum sources. I was rewarded as the best productive manager amongst all plants of my company last year.
Having a skillful and hand on experience of production line within myself, makes me a potential candidate for the same. Therefore, I have attached all my necessary documents with this letter as a formal procedure. If you need further details regarding anything, I am willing to provide.
I am very keen to get reply from you for further procedure.
Yours sincerely,
Maulik B Patel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95108695652 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96055012482 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8295156517 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8181818182 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169903225908 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611995500619 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395788836925 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990788864311 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285448941751 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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