Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing this letter to complain about the situation that is occurring at the River Park in the Ironbound neighborhood. Residents at my neighborhood are suffering from the lack of responsibility of some teenagers whom are letting their dogs run freely at the park without a collar, risking the safety our community.
The River Park has been an important part of our community and as for the moment, children are deprived of their only place to have fun because of some irresponsible youngsters.
The purpose of this letter, other than make the situation known, is to suggest the implantation of a dog park in the neighborhood. I believe that if the dogs and their owners have a special place for them, we would potentially avoid lots of problems.
I’m also sending a petition that has over 1000 signatures requesting either the implantation of the dog park or a prohibition of entrance of dogs without collars.
I hope an action is taken before a serious incident takes place.
Yours faithfully,
Mayara Fonseca
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93369447375 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7946667139 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.125 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214330926147 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865899335403 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795962231205 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788332310116 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065322710979 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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