Dear Mr. Danes
I am Sophia Sandhu who hired you for a family function last month. I am writing this to express my gratitude towards the wonderful job, done by you by capturing our precious moments.
Yesterday, I was going through all the photographs and none of them failed to amaze me. Every picture clicked by you reflects your talent. What I really liked about your work is that most of the pictures are candid and hence show the real expressions and happiness. I got lost in every photograph and felt wholesome.
Another thing is that neither did you leave any important moment to be captured nor did you click extra and unnecessary photos. Your work is genuine. Being impressed by your skill, I even showed all the pictures to some of my friends who were also amazed to see such beautiful clicks. Owing to your dedication to work, I would be more than happy to hire you for my brother’s engagement function which is on 20th of next month. Let me know if you are available.
Looking forward to receive a positive response.
Yours sincerely
Sophia Sandhu
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur skill, I even showed all the pictures to some of my friends who were also amaz...
^^
Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
...f you are available. Looking forward to receive a positive response. Yours sincerely...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, really, so, another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72340425532 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51846957487 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686170212766 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6733845796 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3076923077 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271315097814 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887950774874 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492205656137 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124924994434 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760399579218 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.