Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing you to arrange a birthday party at your restaurant on 20st of June.
First of all, it is for my mother who had suffered from colon cancer for five years. After a long, tiring treatment period, all family members need to relax and have fun until late night.
Secondly, red roses are my mother's favourite flowers consequently they are needed to decorate room. Vegetarian and sugar free meals are needed since there are many guest who suffer from high blood pressure and obesity. Meals which are hign in salt can make them have stomachache hense please do not use any salt for cooking. Further and more importantly, a large computer screen which is needed to present old but fascinating family photographs is vital.
Finally, I would like to ask how many people we will be able to invite for party and how much we will be charged for this event including specially prepared meals. Please also inform me about availability of camera to record it. I hope these arrangements will be done properly.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to relax and have fun until late night. Secondly, red roses are my mothers favou...
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Suggestion: guests
...e meals are needed since there are many guest who suffer from high blood pressure and...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore importantly, a large computer screen which is needed to present old but fasci...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ascinating family photographs is vital. Finally, I would like to ask how many pe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... arrangements will be done properly. I look forward to hearing from you. You...
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...from you. Yours faithfully, Mary Brown
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, look, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8219895288 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45925097402 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.748691099476 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2196684386 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.75 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158987873681 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504292327936 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551203124212 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992563182447 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709294385566 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.