Write a letter to Restaurant Manager to organize a party. Include:
1) Why do you want to give a party?
2) What special arrangements you will need?
3) Ask some relevant questions?
Dear Mr Osborne,
I am writing to you to make enquiries in relation to your restaurant. I am planning to book your place for an upcoming party I will be hosting. Allow me to elaborate.
I am on a brink of a nervous breakdown due to the level of stress in relation to organizing a birthday party for my 90-year-old grandmother. Even though she insists on not having a party, but as she is in the last phase of her life. I feel a party should be hosted. However, the sole reason for hosting a party is to get everyone under one roof to meet my grandmother as she has not been doing well lately.
...
- Many parents think that it is good to teach the children about the value of money Why do you think it is important to teach them the value of money What are the ways that can help children in learning the same 81
- Write a letter to the environment officer in your area complaining about the garbage problem in your neighbourhood and say What is causing the problem Why is it bothering you Suggest a solution to rectify the problem 95
- Your friend wrote you a letter asking for advice on their parents both elderly visiting your area. In the letter you must give: 1) Places that they can see. 2) recommend a place to stay 3) invite them to do something with you 64
- Some people believe that it is the responsibility of the government to transport their children to schools. Other says it is the responsibility of the parents to get their children to school.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37398373984 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56801201379 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544715447154 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9893151416 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7333333333 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240280220357 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754886809313 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560780748009 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135141209883 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475956235561 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.