Write a letter to your boss apologising for the recent meeting you missed at work.
1. Apologise for missing the meeting.
2. Explain what happened.
3. Say what you will do to compensate.
Write not less than 150 words.
Dear Mr Ryan Lee,
I am writing this letter to express my sincere apologies for missing the the meeting yesterday. Even though the material was prepared well before the deadline and also I left the house on time, I got delayed due to some unforeseen circumstance.
Let me explain in detail. Firstly, the recent construction of a new bridge has resulted in terrible traffic congestion during peak hours. Keeping that in mind I decided to leave early. However, unfortunately yesterday one of the construction columns collapsed consequently putting the traffic to a standstill in which i was stuck for almost 2 hours. Secondly, the heavy downpour made it difficult for me to use another mode of transport nor was the mobile network available to inform you about my situation.
Lastly, I would like to request you to allow me 30 minutes of your time today to present my views and ideas of the new product? Additionally, I have done some extensive research and would really appreciate if you could validate them.
Sorry once again and hope you consider my situation favorably.
Your faithfully,
Mary Smith
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| 2019-07-26 | coolchris2100 | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...xpress my sincere apologies for missing the the meeting yesterday. Even though the mate...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...xpress my sincere apologies for missing the the meeting yesterday. Even though the mate...
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Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ng the traffic to a standstill in which i was stuck for almost 2 hours. Secondly,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04324324324 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84076554256 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708108108108 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5592421687 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8181818182 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 4.34317383033 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155712889009 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050205159596 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422541371954 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817072178322 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214099898253 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.