Write a letter to your employer to request a transfer to another office. In the letter:
– Explain why you would like to move
– Request that your employer place you in a specific city
– Request that it be completed by a certain date
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to make a request, to issue my transfer from local orchestra, -opera music and arts centre to its branch located in, a town in the rolling countryside of south-west england.
To begin with, I am farwah ahmad. I have been a loyal employer of yours for over 12 years. Currently, I am serving as the chief conductor at your centre, and living in a hostel near the opera centre. I am suffering from swear stomach disorder, gastropathy. In consequence, I am unable to eat from hostel mess or street food as it is very spicy, hence further affecting my health.
I am in great trouble. Would you be kind enough to make my transfer, to you opera branch located in the village of cheddar, south-west england, As it is nearby residence of my parents.
I plea to confirm it on the weekend dated 9 Oct 2019. So that I could easily manage and shift to that place.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest, hoping that you accept my request.
Yours Sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regards to...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...south-west england. To begin with, I am farwah, currently the chief conduct...
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Line 11, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s it is nearby residence of my parents. I plea to confirm it on the weekend date...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69230769231 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59522606865 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650887573964 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2635977829 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1111111111 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184571584507 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655297624629 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061874867612 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970634692802 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551987450341 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.