write a letter to your friend to ask for help about a new job you have been placed to. your friend is doing the same job in another company. Write a letter and it should contain the following:
1) What is the problem?
2) How your friend can solve it?
3) Meeting arrangement and details
Dear Sajad,
I hope you are well and doing great in the job. I am just writing to tell you that I have been recently appointed in same profile as your are.
Let me explain my situation in more detail that I have joined Siemens company last month and are facing some problems. I am working in this organisation as Intelligent Transportation Engineer and I remember your designation is same. I am facing problem with SCOOT software and am not able to configure it properly.
I would like to ask for your help as I am having issues with commands. If it is possible for you to send me list of commands how to validate a junction and tips how to enter these mnemonics as I checked but did not find anywhere.
Could you be available for the meeting on Skype so that I will be able to know where will I start and do I need to have man-power with me or not. I will be available anytime as per your convenience.
Thank you for your consideration.
Your friend,
Iqbal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...not able to configure it properly. I would like to ask for your help as I am...
^
Line 13, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h commands. If it is possible for you to send me list of commands how to validate...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52486187845 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65595919154 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618784530387 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1128260134 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4545454545 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297480878063 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125241123645 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885978506398 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154049499209 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068601912214 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.