Write a letter to your friend to recommend a book to read that you have read.
You should include
Describe the book.
How it can help him/her?
Where can he get it from?
Dear Tom,
You’ve been avoiding all of your friends including me from a couple of months. Yesterday, I talked to your mother and came to why the reason behind it. I’m writing to recommend a book that’s is a must-read for you at this time. Also, I’ll explain how it can help you in the long run.
The book has a captivating title “A Monk who sold his Ferrari” by “Robin Sharma”. It’s a story of a prominent lawyer who put an end to his legal practice and starts exploring the wonders he has been missing for a long time.
As you have also stopped looking at the bright side of your life, this captivating book would persuade you to come in terms with what has happened in the past and move forward in life. This true story will force you to remove melancholy form your state of mind.
By the way, I have already sent you a physical copy of this text and you can procure it from your post box. Now you don’t have any excuse to not to read it.
Hope to see you soon in the same thriving attitude which I have always admired.
Lots of love,
Alex Barns
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: ITS_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'that is'?
Suggestion: that is
...ind it. I’m writing to recommend a book that’s is a must-read for you at this time. Also,...
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Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ys admired. Lots of love, Alex Barns
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35960591133 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19730940105 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64039408867 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.377042432 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.75 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383617054081 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126604485427 0.0766984524023 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892614264948 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193732155502 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124728196245 0.0580467560999 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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