Hi Bob,
How are you? Hope everything is fine.
Do you remember that once I had told you about a book related with the French revolution history, called "The Miserables" or "Les Miserables" in French.
My father bought that book to me as a birthday gift and I was really got surprised. It was excited to have a book which I was searching for a long time.
I strongly advise you to read this book, because I know your are also keen of historical matters and battles in history. I really enjoyed this book. It was amazing describing power and perfect imagination of the author, Victor Hugo, that links the issues with the reality. There are plenty of scenes in connection with love, passion, political analyses, drama and the facts based on the true stories.
As I remember, you are going to write some novels in future. So that, this book will help you to improve your imagination and writing skills. And I recommend you to pay attention of the chronological sequence, correlations and the fair language of the book. You will find out many important details from the novel.
Finally, I hope you will buy and read this book soon. If you can not find it anywhere, please, let me now.
I can borrow you my book. It will take 2 days to arrive to your address by post.
Have nice weekend. See you soon.
Yours,
Russel
- You and your friend are planning a picnic in the countryside Write Which arrangements have you already done Other activities that can be done How can your friend help with the arrangements 78
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary 73
- People are not paying attention to environmental protection What is the cause and suggest solutions to deal with this issue 59
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary 61
- In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 51, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ber, you are going to write some novels in future. So that, this book will help you to im...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7268907563 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66527346618 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2034783699 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.2105263158 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5263157895 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.52631578947 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370628613438 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108123531448 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811777492482 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16543925998 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666158013505 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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